• @TallonMetroid@lemmy.world
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      146 days ago

      “Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.

    • @xmunk@sh.itjust.works
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      6 days ago

      Elon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default.

      A that shoved in the middle would fix that.

    • @Darkassassin07@lemmy.ca
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      Senator Elon Musk Called a ‘Traitor’ Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’

      This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor.

      Try:

      Senator, who was called a ‘Traitor’ by Elon Musk, Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’